Antigone Cadmus

Sorry for taking so long, Becki! Here's your review! Aela kept glancing at the boy, taking note of his small stature and scruffy down hair that fell into his eyes. ...

So this is the end of your prologue... I think I'll do a review of the prologue overall. Location, Location Maybe this is because I read each section of SP ...

Hey, Mike! Nice to meet you. This story looks really great -- I would love to critique it. Unfortunately, this is just too long! If you are just reading it, ...

Back again for review part two! Laughing merrily as she flipped her skirt and petticoat around in time to her continued skipping, Aela came to a clearing in the forest. ...

Hey, Becki W! Here as requested! I guess my last reviews of your work must have helped. ^_^ The leaves rustling, some unable to hold onto the branches any longer ...

Review number two, here as requested. After leaving the block last, only two had followed me, but they were faster than I had expected. Whoa... this is happening much too ...

Hey, R. Ghallagher! Here as requested! It looks like all the nit-picks have been taken, so I'll just give you an overall. Prose You start nearly every sentence with the ...

I seem to be late for the nit-picks again. Sorry. But I suppose my last reviews must have been good enough for you to come back. =] May I suggest ...

Hey, Coleen. Glad to know my other reviews helped! Here as requested. =] I stared at Mark and then glanced at Luke's dad, Hmm. This sentence is off for several ...

Here as requested (again)! She saw me sitting up and looked over to the wild IV machine beside me. The machine at a hospital that reads your vital signs isn't ...

Sorry for the long wait, Arcaus! the abuse rung in his ears loud and hard, --Capitalize the. --'Rung?' It should be rang. “I swear private if you spent as many ...

Hey, Fire_of_Dawn! :shock: Well, this is... short... Oh well. Post a bit more next time and get the full value of the a hundred points that you are spending! ^_^ ...

Right now there are far too many grammatical errors in this story to do a line by line. Instead, I'll give you some tips! --Whenever someone new talks, start a ...

Hey, Chocolate Writing Cat! Here as requested! “Courtney, this is going to be awesome! I still can’t believe that you actually got tickets!” When starting off a story, you shouldn't ...

Here as requested, Rosey! Clair Ha, I agree with lhighton. Forgive me if I'm wrong (maybe this is a Canadian thing?), but to my knowledge the name is spelled with ...